Week 3- This photo can be an example of design that could use some more work. This piece is very busy- meaning that it's hard to focus on one thing. There are no distinct margins, and everything is in the center and building on top of each other. There's clutter and it's hard to know what's going on.
Original pinner sez: These sketchbook pages are the unequivocal result of effort, passion and enthusiasm. Although 'decoration' is usually unnecessary within a textile or fashion design sketchbook, in this case, the background patterning demonstrates a complete understanding of the aesthetic; a strong personal response to the colours, shapes, textures, lines and forms of the work studied.