Oh my gosh thank you! I think this helped me just put the cherry on top of my villain, and helped me with trying to give my hero motivation. http://www.weightlossjumpstars.com/self-motivational-weight-loss-books/
Writing Advice by Chuck Palahniuk | "Writing Advice: by Chuck Palahniuk In six seconds, you’ll hate me. But in six months, you’ll be a better writer. From this point forward—at least for the next half year—you may not use “thought” verbs. These include: Thinks, Knows, Understands, Realizes, Believes, Wants, Remembers, Imagines, Desires, and a hundred others you love to use. The list should also include: Loves and Hates. And it should include: Is and Has, but we’ll get to those later.--"