All except 3 & Better than "Learn from the mistakes of others." Better than "There is no 'We'. you (individually) have NOTHING to do with their success or failure" Solid advice - I love this. (Hate the typos, though.
You are the flame.the burning in my heart.I desire you above all else. Ignite me. Never let the flames dim. Belong to me and allow me to belong to you. Let us burn together. Let us keep this fire alight by any means necessary.