By Jen Sublasky. I really like the design in this flyer, but it is incredibly hard to read. As far as proximity is concerned, they put everything right next to each other. But there is no repetition to be seen. The only thing I can say as that you have the contrast that makes it appear as a glass of beer. There are so many fonts inside of it that it is nearly impossible to read. I appreciate the attempt at creativity, but as far as the elements of design are concern,
Stephanie Bamunu- I really like the idea of creating a design that resembles Architecture as that is the main discipline of Design that I am interested in. I would like to create possibly the second page to a calendar like this; in an architectural form.