"So many young women treat life as a constant status update. It's as if they're more concerned with how their lives look than how their lives feel." --- I think there's a lot more truth in that than we care to admit!
This says, I always wondered why somebody did'nt do something about that, then i realized I am somebody. It has punctuation errors, misspelled words. I always wondered why someone didn't do something about that, then i realized I am somebody.